Feedback and Revisions

Little things that were noted to be changed, like the boxes around the group of texts. I would need to widen images and instead of white filling in the text boxes in the cover, it'll be clear to have a more magazine feel. The text was to basic for a magazine and needs to be changed to something more dramatic and bold. i also noticed now that my two-page spread doesn't look much like a magazine so slight changes should easily fix that up. Along with all this, the photos also need variation because some have qualities that are the same.